Contents: Mock-up 2

On this image, there is a picture of myself, posing as the editor with a little blurb. Even though I am aware not that many people actually read about the editor, I think it makes it all appear more professional and realistic. The rest of it is a bit of a let down though, as it is too bland and there looks like there is a lot going on when in fact there isn't that much. Too many colours that aren't strong enough and don't express the genre to the extent that is needed. The layout is too 'all over the place' as well and makes it appear more amateurish. Another thing, is the fact there is no title, though it should be obvious it is a contents page and but it may take away some professionalism.