
Above is the new version of the double-page spread due to numerous comments from my feedback. Like with my contents page I originally asked 15 people on their opinions of my previous 'Final, Final! Double Page Spread!'. The majority of the comments were good and said they liked the layout of the text and the images, though a couple of comments were mentioned about the faint green circular shape in the middle and how it looked as though it had just been 'stuck' there so I decided to try something a little different. The colour green is still tied in with the front page but the design is better and attracts the attention more so. After asking the same 15 people, they all agreed that the 'bubbles' looked more professional and were more eye catching than the shape before.
For the full analysis on my double-page spread see 'Final, Final! Double Page Spread!' as the only thing that has changed on this post is the background.
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